in the third the word bubble is a bit blurry. not the words but the bubble itself.

posted by liz (Guest) on 12 pm Sat December 07

try to make bubbles look the same-ish.
But it's good =D

posted by Arionne (Guest) on 1 pm Tue January 08

This does happen sometimes.
Covering up someones bad situation and making it seem like your own is a bigger worse situation.

i've been through that.

posted by Nella (Guest) on 8 pm Fri January 08

Looks good so far, just a bit of constructive criticism - You may not have gotten to the captions yet, I'm sure you've had enough work with the art, but you have some spelling and grammar mistakes that are distracting and make some of the captions hard to understand. If you need some help with the editing, let me know!

posted by Sherri (Guest) on 9 pm Thu March 08