more nitpicking!
You did a typo on the top of the page xD It's "really", not "reall".
But it's really nice ^^ Love the textures
Something I woulda done though: The text on the top (and sometimes bottom) should like... be aligned with the width of your page, no? Now its just a bit overflowing. Also, maybe add the text in the art? Like, cut it into bits, and make them float around the characters. Still easy to read, but not just at the top, where one could miss it. It's your choice though. Still really nice now though ^^

posted by Arionne (Guest) on 7 pm Thu January 08

I like this panel a lot. It really tells the story using the illustration to show what you mean. I love her expression - all dolled up in new clothes and not feeling quite comfortable in them. "Asher's Seal of Approval" is hilarious too. :o)

posted by Sherri (Guest) on 9 pm Thu March 08