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Buckett, 3 pm Wed January 08

- Why the doom wave and shock wave? I was bored and had pretty photoshop brushes, that's why. I really want to thank everyone for their support with Missed Moments, but please don't stop! There's only 5 pages left after this one, it's the home stretch! I still really need fanart and CRITICISM and comments and ratings...:D

Much love! :D

Oh and this is taking place in the US of A for my fellow Canadians who have health care and can't understand why someone would actually PAY.

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Thanks for commenting! It moves a bit fast for me too, but I don't really have a choice since I only have 21 pages to flesh out this story, that could have easily gone for longer. My later pages are already finished, so I'll keep your comments for character development on anatomy and clarity for future comics and drawings. And I do look up a lot of stuff, you should have seen me before!

Thanks again, I love your avy!

-Buckett

posted by Buckett on 12 pm Sat January 08





 

I hope you don't mind my criticism, but I just wanna say the text in the second panel, the "doomwave" and the "shockwave" kinda take some tension away from the moment... I think it'd look better if that text was in the first panel, and the second panel was emptier.

Of course it's just a matter of oppinion.

Cool page and nice portrayal of feelings!!

posted by Some_unknown_dude on 2 pm Wed January 08



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