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Buckett, 12 pm Sat January 08

Teehee - *Ahem* yeah...I can't draw kisses... More prush obsession and background play...Only four pages left!

Please PLEASE comment with critique, (See all of Arionne's posts and kreestus' on the last page for some good examples) it really does help a lot and once again I beg for fanart. A good and brief explanation as to why is on my fanart page.

Oh and, if you guys were wondering why there's a 2 day gap from the last post, it's because school started. Posts should be regular again from now on till the end!

Mucho love!

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I have to say very interesting comic!

posted by snorgar on 12 pm Sat January 08





 

Mayhaps it's because of the time restraints and things having to be rushed,but aside from the first conversation on the roof in the beginning,Mickey seems to have no real personality,outside of being completely self-absorbed. Even when she's following Asher around like a puppy,she doesn't even really have a fake persona to show him that we can see,she just seems very monotone with everything.

I do however love the point of the story itself,and the way it makes you think,and it's quite good for something with such a pressured limit put on it.

Art wise,I also love it,though in that last panel,it looks like Angela is getting ready to jump off,instead of sitting down waiting.

posted by CruelAngelic on 1 pm Sat January 08



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